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(please read me from the bottom up)when birds breathe, a poem by chungyen chang

Posted by changc on October 06, 2008 12:09 AM | Permalink | Hits: 353
Tags: writing, poetry, poems, birds, fire, clouds, earth, sky, suicide

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Posted by Prodinterios | October 06, 2008 1:20 AM | http://www.prodinterios.com | Prodinterios's profile | Permalink

Another cute poem to read^^,

Sorry about that little misunderstanding.

Sure we can trade links^^ Adding Yours right now

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Posted by lvs | October 06, 2008 1:42 AM | http://indradhanush-laal.blogspot.com | lvs's profile | Permalink

interesting that you have asked readers to read this poem bottom up? Why?

From dusk to dawn, very nice poem!

You have brought astronauts and astronaut movies into the poem. That sort of breaks the imagination of the skies and birds to special effects and movies :)

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Posted by Shazane | October 06, 2008 11:49 AM | ENTROPY | Shazane's profile | Permalink

Amazing, the structure especially, and the poem itself as well. The shape and symmetry and how it corresponds with the concept, just brilliant.

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